Childhood’s Will
That was Sunday when I played with my friend in the school. I saw them brought new toy which was very great. I asked them and borrowed that. I was interested in that toy. That was the first toy that I had seen which had high quality and gave me joyful. I wish I could have that too.
I would like to buy that toy but when I asked my friend about the price, that was very expensive. I did not have enough money. I asked my mother to buy that for me but she refused because I used to break my toy. I insisted my mother but she still refused. I cried aloud to make mother gave up and bought me what I wanted.
My father came and scolded me. I was afraid with my father but I still cried. My father became more angry with me them my mother calmed my father down. She promised with me if I became obedient child, she would buy me that thing. I stopped crying and I was very happy.
I obeyed what my father and my mother said then a week later, they bought me the toy as they promised. When I remembered that past, I felt embarrassed for what I had done to my parents. That childhood period was awful. I made my parents get problems and I did not care with them. Now I want to make them proud of me and don’t give more problems.
Opps, mind your mechanics please
BalasHapus"I obeyed what my father and my mother said then a week later,"
I think it's better supposed to be like
"I obeyed what my father and my mother said. Then a week later,"
it will be better to read that way.. please consider it and tell what you think of it
Your story is so interesting Prajinggo,,,
BalasHapusWhen we are child, we often cried for some toys that we want,,,
i love your story,
Good job!
@ bhisma, thank you for the comment and suggestion. it can be useful for me to improve my writing.
BalasHapus@ita, Thank you for the comment