My Adorable Mom
Last march was
the worst day that I experienced. I didn't expect this happened, my dear mother
passed away, and left me forever to return to the almighty one’s side. My
Mother suffered because of illness for long time but I didn't suspect this
happened so fast. This unexpected case made me very sad, my mother my mother
that I loved lie down in the funeral will never in my side whenever I got
problem, calmed me and gave me suggestions. Whenever I closed my eyes, I see my
mother in front of me with ordinary appearances, good heart, and ability in
cooking which made me very happy.
Most people talked
to me that my appearances looked like my mother. Actually my mother was shorter
than me but she was the most beautiful woman that I had seen. Her black short
wavy hair made me enjoy seeing her. She had brown skin looked like most of
Balinese. I would never forget about her black rounded eyes which always
watched and took a care of me.
My mother was
kind of person who didn't want to idle and didn't do anything. She loved to
work or did something even though she got illness. Her kindness was so warm.
She was always aware with other and she also liked children. Whenever she
looked children, she treated them kindly. When I was child, I was very naughty.
I often skipped class, fought with other, argued with my parents so that made
my parents in trouble. She was kind of mother who was patiently taught her son
about what I should or I should not do. My mother was always by my side
whenever I needed her.
My Mother was
fabulous. She was amazing in cooking. Every day she cooked for her family and
whatever she made tasted so yummy even that dishes made of inexpensive
ingredients like tofu, fermented soybean or fish. I really yearned for my
mother’s cooking.
Even though my
mother had returned to Deity’s side, she will always be in my heart. She was
perfect who gave birth of me. Her kindness would not be forgotten. She was
pretty woman who always made me missed to her goodness and meals that she made.
I hope she would rest in peace at God side.
I am sorry to hear that, Jinggo. You have to be strong because I am sure that your mother already rest in peace at God side.
BalasHapusI am sure that your mother is the best woman in your life.
Even though she is not there around you, I am sure that she is always in your heart.
I also really love your story, Jinggo. You can describe your mother well. The content is so interesting, too.
Your story really touches my feeling.
Keep strong, Jinggo.
You have done your best in your writing and it was a great job :)
So sorry for your Mother... be strong dude
BalasHapusgood story indeed but...
there are still some small mistakes like "My mother was kind " which is supposed to be "My mother was a kind"
@ widya: thank you widya ^^
BalasHapus@ Bhisma: can you tell me the difference of " a kind " and "kind"? Personally I think that words are same and i think that sentence is not wrong. And thank you for the comment