My
Precious Friend
Last week end, I spent my holiday in my home town. As usual, I got up at early morning, and then help my parent to clean the house. I remember that when I decided to watch TV to entertain myself. I chose a channel of a good film. I didn’t really remember the title, but the content was very good and interesting. It could touch my deepest heart with its value of life. That was film about the meaning of friendship. When I thought of that film, I always remembered to my friend who has similarity with the main character. My friend has usual appearance, always has advice whenever I get problem and makes me happy.
He is ordinary boy who does not concern about his appearance. He always dresses depend on the situation and never becomes extravagant. That habit makes him looks usual boy but he is someone who is special in my life.
He is the best friend that I have whenever I get problems. He is always by my side and help to solve it through calms me and gives great way to get out of that trouble. He is full of advice like someone who has answer about the problems that I face.
He is a comedian. He always entertains me by his jokes. The gag that out of his mouth always make me smile even when I down because of something. He makes my day more colorful.
I am lucky to have friend like him. He is the best and special boy for me. The way he set his appearance is usual but special. He entertains me with his jokes. He is full of answer of my problems that I get. He often helps me with his great advice. I hope we can be friend forever.
hai jinggo, your story is very interisting. its about friendship right?
BalasHapusbut I found in first paragraph "It could touch my deepest heart with its value of life" i think this is not a sentence you may add several object to fix this sentence.
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I am sorry but that is already a sentence and that already had object. The object is "my deepest heart"
BalasHapusthank you for the comment and i have visited your blog ^^